Nonsense! There is actually nothing warmer and cosier than sharing a sleeping bag with a hairy backed man…I tell my girlfriend this everytime we go camping
Hello is that the police? Yes I think someone is watching me. His name is Michael Platypus Edward. I think he might have been in my house. Yes I understand that he is in Australia and I am in the UK but I am not a predictable person and yet somehow ..... HE KNEW MY EVERY THOUGHT AND MOVEMENT....
Hahaha “I am not a predictable person” — I hear that, April, because neither am I.
But seriously, thank you, for the lovely comment — I always enjoy your comments. And thank you for using my full and definitely correct name in your call to the police :)
“Bet the words didn’t see THAT word coming!” — Kimber, that was hilarious! And you’re right, the words had no idea that such spectacular-halloween variations of the word spectacular were even possible. You definitely win this round.
Also, thank you, for reading, commenting, restacking, and for having fun with words — it is all very much appreciated.
Wow, I don't know what more to say, you beautifully explained the feelings of the reader, the feelings of being watched, the feeling of someone is observing us. I want to say many things but I am unable to find the words for appreciation. This blog is gonna stick with me for a long time.
Wow, thank you, Himanshu, for such lovely and kind words. It really means a lot to hear that the piece worked well in your eyes, and so, I really appreciate you taking the time to comment and let me know what you thought. :)
Great read Michael - you have a way of pulling your reader deeper and deeper. This post reminds me of that Netflix show series called Joan is Awful. Wonder if you heard of it?
To be honest, it's not. But I think watching the trailer will let you know why I mentioned it. Maybe you'll decide to watch it after. I'd hate for my first recommendation for you would be something you'd hate haha!
Thank you, Ben! I really appreciate that :)
I had to adjust my reading glasses. At first i though it said “hairy back”
But seriously, the 2nd person creep of this tale is great
Thank you, Jon, I really appreciate that :)
Hairy backs are also quite creepy....
Haha I know right, I think that may have been a better/spookier way to end!
Nonsense! There is actually nothing warmer and cosier than sharing a sleeping bag with a hairy backed man…I tell my girlfriend this everytime we go camping
Hahaha Simon, this is gold. Once again you crack me up.
As for sharing a sleeping bag with a hairy backed man, I’ll have to take your word for it. :)
Hahaha, Jon, that’s amazing!
I think “hairy back” would have been an even better/spookier ending.
Hello is that the police? Yes I think someone is watching me. His name is Michael Platypus Edward. I think he might have been in my house. Yes I understand that he is in Australia and I am in the UK but I am not a predictable person and yet somehow ..... HE KNEW MY EVERY THOUGHT AND MOVEMENT....
Hahaha “I am not a predictable person” — I hear that, April, because neither am I.
But seriously, thank you, for the lovely comment — I always enjoy your comments. And thank you for using my full and definitely correct name in your call to the police :)
Fabulous and truly creepy story Michael, loved it!
Also, funny thing, the police knew instantly who you were, apparently there is an Interpol wanted poster and everything.....
Ohh no, their on to me! Hahaha
Thank you, April, I’m so glad you enjoyed it. :)
Seasonably unnerving...! Expertly executed...
Thank you, Mya. I really appreciate you saying so. :)
*Lights a candle for that comforting old school feel of reading haunting words*
This is absolutely spooktacular...dare I say creeptacular! (Bet the words didn’t see THAT word coming!)👻
*Blows out candle-instant darkness and creepy, villainous laughs ensue*
“Bet the words didn’t see THAT word coming!” — Kimber, that was hilarious! And you’re right, the words had no idea that such spectacular-halloween variations of the word spectacular were even possible. You definitely win this round.
Also, thank you, for reading, commenting, restacking, and for having fun with words — it is all very much appreciated.
Thanks for writing a brilliant, witty piece that speaks to the soul and beyond!😄
Thank you, Kimber. ☺️🙏😊
My brain is now full of opposing and conflicting thoughts. I'm confused yet laughing.
Hahaha excellent, then the writing had the desired effect.
Thanks, RenoQueen, it’s always a pleasure to read your comments :)
Indeed and thank you!
How did you know?!?
Ohh I have my ways... haha
But in all seriousness, thanks for reading and commenting, Misbehaved Muse! It it much appreciated :)
My pleasure!
woah! I feel like I just walked into one of those palm reader stalls in Chinatown
Excellent, then my plan is working... haha
But seriously, thanks Daisy, your comment is much appreciated. :)
Simply a joy to get caught up in this one!
Thank you, Robin. I’m glad you enjoyed it. And as always I really appreciate you taking the time to comment.
Haha! Yay! Seasonal color - well done Michael. You left your back door unlocked, by the way... ;) 👻💀👁️
Haha well played sir.
And, of course, thank you brother - it is much appreciated. 😊
your phone
has just flickered
with flashes
brought you a smile
...you know is
(the trouble)
instantly, you sensed
(...my pulse)
🕮🎕
[something i wrote a time ago]
this story absorbed me in its flow;
i loved it
Thanks for sharing your piece, Coco — I like it. I can see how it relates.
And thanks for your kind words about my piece, I’m glad you enjoyed it and I really appreciate you taking the time to say so.
Michael, thank you too.
Trick or treat?
Nice! Very well played. I guess, I was going for a little of column A and a little of column B.
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment, Nicole, it is much appreciated. :)
Oooooo very witty - I felt this
Thanks, Zan! That is much appreciated, my friend.
This post is equal parts well-crafted and creepy! Well done my friend for the holiday-themed edition of TCP! 🎃👻☠️💀🧟🐈⬛
Thank you, Marmi! That is much appreciated. And thank you for enlightening me to TCP acronym - I quite like that 🙏😊
Yw my friend! I've just realized for my newsletter though, the acronym would be GDP - yuck too macroeconomic-sounding 😂
Hahaha ohh no, that does have a heavy economic ring to it 😂
I like the title of your newsletter though - I’ve always thought it’s one of the more fun ones. 😊
Wow, I don't know what more to say, you beautifully explained the feelings of the reader, the feelings of being watched, the feeling of someone is observing us. I want to say many things but I am unable to find the words for appreciation. This blog is gonna stick with me for a long time.
Wow, thank you, Himanshu, for such lovely and kind words. It really means a lot to hear that the piece worked well in your eyes, and so, I really appreciate you taking the time to comment and let me know what you thought. :)
Great read Michael - you have a way of pulling your reader deeper and deeper. This post reminds me of that Netflix show series called Joan is Awful. Wonder if you heard of it?
Thank you, Marc, I really appreciate your kind words - it means a lot.
And no, I haven’t heard of it, but now I’m intrigued 🤔
Is it worth checking out?
To be honest, it's not. But I think watching the trailer will let you know why I mentioned it. Maybe you'll decide to watch it after. I'd hate for my first recommendation for you would be something you'd hate haha!
I appreciate your honesty, and your concern for offering a good recommendation.
I’ll telI you what: I’ll check out the trailer to catch the reference and I’ll leave it at that haha.
Thanks Marc :)
My name is all I have!
Good deal, Michael!